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littlerain ([personal profile] littlerain) wrote in [community profile] sportsfest 2018-06-25 09:48 pm (UTC)

Re: FILL: Team KinKage, G

The Last Line, i'm not crying you're crying Ki your writing is amazing !!
It's great that their relationship only get started at the end, the build up was well paced. I love how you describe Hinata each time, its nearly the same words but it never gets too repetitive <3

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