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cai ([personal profile] towine) wrote in [community profile] sportsfest 2018-06-23 06:57 pm (UTC)

Re: FILL: Team Grandstand, G

this is so??? soft but also really really beautiful and warm?? i love the way you described kenma slowly wearing down until he couldn't take it anymore. "Finally, Kenma broke. He stood, pushing his chair back with an ugly scrape, and dragged his fingers across the table’s polished wooden surface to clench his hand into a fist. His head was pounding." that imagery was so good and really captured the way kenma was feeling?? YOU'RE SO GOOD

and the way hinata just gets it and doesn't ask questions and already understands the things kenma wants/needs sometimes he's just so kind and patient and kenma knows that and it just really really captures what i love about them and you did it so well ;-;

and kenma realizing he wants to kiss hinata is so beautifully written, and then when it happens i'm just [soft scream] because it's so slow and gentle and sweet ;;__;;

you really did an amazing job like i think u should be really proud, thank you for writing such a beautiful piece TvT

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