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stariceling ([personal profile] stariceling) wrote in [community profile] sportsfest 2019-06-24 11:56 am (UTC)

Re: Fill: Team Grandstand, T

I freaking love this to pieces. Riko's determination to not make the same mistakes twice is illustrated beautifully with how critical she can be with the current state of her team. It's really bittersweet, but I'm happy to see the consequences of pushing the same players, especially Teppei with his knee, too hard being addressed. I love the hopeful note at the end, too.

This is so beautifully written! Thank you for such a wonderful fill!

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